My Brother

Author: 
ValeriaG

It was a rainy, cloudy, dark school day.  I heard thunder and lightning, and the day had just begun.  I also heard raindrops falling from the sky.  I just came home from school, sat down, and tried to relax because I was tired of being at school.  When my brother realized I came home, he just started asking me random things because he had nothing to do.  While he was talking to me I ignored him.  I was acting like I listened to him and eventually he found out I was ignoring him.  When he found out, he wanted to get revenge on me.

The next day it was another ordinary day.  When I came home I was exhausted.  Later that day, I went to my room.  I noticed a difference in my room from the morning and that moment.  I realized that some of my things were gone.  I was curious because I had no idea who took my things.  My face was full of anger and suspiciousness. 

When I asked my brother if he had seen my things he admitted to me that he took it for a good reason.  After that, I asked him what the reason was.  My brother said sadly, " I noticed that you ignored me while I was talking to you."  Next, I apologized to him about being rude and ignoring him.  I felt guilty for what I did.  That day I learned my lesson.  The lesson that I learned was that I have to think before I do something and before I say something.  I also learned what goes around, comes around.  This means that if you do something good or bad it will come back to you.  "This is one of the moments and lessons that I will never forget".  I thought to myself.  "This was an important lesson to me because I don't make the same mistake again".  I said sounding relieved to myself".

 

About the Author:

   Valeria is a very well writer.  Sometimes she struggles, but she learns from her mistakes.  Valeria was inspired by her brother to write this specific memoir.  Her parents were born in Mexico, but Valeria was born in Manhattan in December 28, 1999.  Her brother inspired her to write this memoir because she wanted to write something about her friends at first, but then she wanted to change the topic to family.  She thought of what to write until she thought about the time she was rude to her brother and learned her lesson not to be rude.

Comments

Cool descriptions >:]

Cool descriptions >:]

Thank you!

Thank you!

Valeria this is a nice

Valeria this is a nice memoir especially how you described everything

Thank you Maria.

Thank you Maria.